Dream Deep

Welcome, my friend! ^_~ And of course, learning to be yourself is half the game. When you've got that master, everything else just falls into place. Nice to meet you ...

I noticed Tannar's fanclub... Livny is now going to go find a bar somewhere where he can drown his depression in cheap vodka and Shan's fighting with Kyra - she ...

Pretty good for one of your first posted poems, as far as concept goes. But the wording quickly becomes thick and difficult to get through, let alone stay attentive to. ...

I read that a good while ago, I though it was a very sweet story. I like how the story made a full circle, how everything was resolved. ^_^ It ...

It sucked. - Shan Tefur Chaotic. Bloody. Tannar-induced mayhem, if you want to know. Unfortunate? Painful? Did I mention the blood, perchance? - Arrehei Livny -- Do you own your ...

I agree, Crysi. ^_~ What I don't agree with is the idea that many well-known authors back, saying write even if you don't know how it ends - if you ...

Thanks Rosethorn! That was quite helpful and I'm very glad you liked it. Oy, I've gotta post more before I lose my audience's attention. ^_~

Ah, thanks Brad. Ill do that. It should work this time - if not I'll give you a holler. ^_~ Much appreciate it.

Spacing, my friend, you really want spacing. Every dialogue needs to be a new paragraph. Fine story but very difficult to read as a solid block of text (as above). ...

*wherever the variables a or b are mentioned, they refer to the integral existance theorem, where 'If f is continuous on [a,b], then f is integrable on [a,b]'. *dark blue ...

^ 9/10, very nice. ;)

Oy, I keep forgetting you're a mod, Imp, this sudden power on your part keeps taking me by surprise whenever you move things or edit them. ^_^

Heh, not quite, but nearly there. I'm getting rather far now, and I'm ashamed I'm not posting more of it here - but that's think about YWS, once people begin ...

Jack, I'm in hopeless love with your avatar and your personal text. ;)

Amusing, Chantel. It could probably do without the violet title, but all the same, it was quite droll. Good job, on this. ^_^